Written for Trifecta's 33 writing challenge.
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Sunrise they drop lines, sip coffee; smiling at each other.
Afternoon’s heat packs
coolers, friends and music tied together.
Sunset drops on a perfectly still night; moonlit lovers float…No one in sight.
(Great video)
28 comments:
A beautiful poem describing an equally beautiful day!. Very nice.
Thanks! Those ARE beautiful days when it all comes together like that.
AAAAHHHH, the boating life!!!!
lovely! makes me wanna go boating........
best,
MOV
Yes, yes, yes! I want to be there!
Ahh, I can picture it all. The peace, the joy, the insanity :)
Good job
You had a pretty day. Good. Sun is playing hide and seek here.
Now, this sounds like a great day!
Sweet! Wish I was there...Great job!
Love the last line of this piece. "Moonlit lover float...No one in sight" Perfection.
Very nice! Just think of all the stories a pontoon can tell. =)
Nothing beats a boat. Nothing. I liked this a lot--makes me wish for sunny skies.
Lovely. I would like to be on that boat...
Anna :o]
It's pretty sweet!
Thanks, MOV!
Me, too!
Carrie
You nailed it because it's all three especially insane (at times, like last night).
Yesterday was perfect, day and night.
Doesn't it?
Thanks!
It's very romantic...floating in the still of the night.
This one could as we've had it for about ten years. Wish it would tell me what my kids were doing at 2am last night.
I agree. I could take boat rides all day and all night and often do. A beautifully sunny Sunday here!
Thanks, Anna!
Oh yes! And down here in the South, the sun's contrasts are particularly easy to feel, even out on the water.
Hey, JQ!
You are the only one who picked up on the my object being the sun. Yes! The contrasts of the sun making up a complete day and you would feel it even more in Kentucky.
that sounds like the perfect day!
It does shape up that way. Thanks, Renada!
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