Friday, March 8, 2013

Trifextra: Please



Once stone.

Turning my insides out,

You softened me.

Wringing like a wet rag,

You altered me.

Stunned.

Left

Wondering…

“Man, was I dreaming?”

Craving…

It would happen again.

Pleading…

Please…Please…PLEASE!

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This Trifextra entry was inspired by recent conversations ;-)


41 comments:

Unknown said...

I think I broke a sweat on that one Gina!

christina said...

LOL at Sam's comment! :)
nicely done, Gina

Anonymous said...

I know the feeling, here. :) Nice job!

Jared Karol said...

Really digging these trifectas. . .

Kir said...

Oh.. Gina. This is sweet sexy, and subtle. You always do such a great job with writing the emotion.. This is just one more time.

Please, please.. Yes. (and reminds me of my girl in the supermarket)

Tgif my friend

Bo said...

Its a wonderful feeling when someone is able to fill you with that kind of desire.

Terrific as always

steph said...

Craving it would happen again... oh to have that memory - for anything... delicious emotion!

Gina said...

Yea! But I hope that's a good thing.

Gina said...

Sam's comment was funny. It had the "right" effect! Thanks, Christina!

Gina said...

Me too! Love finding common ground. Thanks!

Gina said...

I'm glad you're digging too and I'd be digging it if you'd hit up Trifecta soon. You've been talking about it for a while...

Gina said...

Coming from my saucy and sassy storytelling friend, I love that compliment even more. This woman, the one written here, wants a yes too.

Wha, what? Who is this supermarket girl you speak of? Do I know her?

Back atcha! TGIF. I'm really ready!

Gina said...

Uh-huh!!! The best! Thanks, Bo!

Gina said...

And something to replay in your mind over and over and over again. Until you get your wish. YES delicious!

Anonymous said...

Great writing! (I can't top Sam's comment, so I'll just leave it at that :))

De Jackson said...

I need a cigarette. ;)

Well done.

de
www.whimsygizmo.wordpress.com

Thomas Charles MacInnes said...

Always a pleasure to read your work, Gina. I think you've left us all smiling a little brighter than we were before clicking on your link. Thanks. :)

About Last Weekend said...

Haha! Love the "I need a cigarette' comment.

Lance said...

The way you formatted this, it seemed like 333 words because I was on the edge of my seat with each line. Outstanding 33, one of my favorites.

Jared Karol said...

I know, I know. . . Did you know that I was on the original list of writers for Yeah Write (then called lovelinks) like almost two years ago? It took me a while to get going on it. Let's hope it doesn't take as long for Trifecta. . .

kymm said...

From stone to jelly. Excellent poem, Gina!

Trifecta said...

Smoking.

Gina said...

No, I didn't know that but get your rear end over to Trifecta sooner than later. It's a fun change of pace.

Gina said...

I have a pack hidden away for times when I drag out the spicy. No, not really but thanks, de!

Atreyee said...

How sexciting!;-)Love has that kind of effect & definitely alters us,leaving us asking for more :D

Great going Gina:-)

Gina said...

Well, that pleases me. I love your comment, Tom. Thank you.

Gina said...

Me too. Sometimes wish I smoked ;-)

Gina said...

I think you appreciate my feistier entries, Lance. Thank you very much for the compliment. Love it!

Gina said...

Biology at it's finest? Or maybe the person...

Thank you so much, kymm.

Gina said...

I try ;-)

Gina said...

I LOVE your new word! Can I use it sometime? Yes, certain people alter us physically, mentally and/or emotionally. All good. Thanks for your kind comment.

Anonymous said...

Good one! Loving the comments on this one.

Gina said...

Well, I'm just happy you thought about the possibility of topping his. Thanks, Janna!

Unknown said...

Ahhh reminders of new love or a womans want to 'feel' that way again. You softened me..wring like a wet rage - this was gorgeous.

Draug said...

I think the temperature rose a few degrees. What an...emotional piece lol

Gina said...

Sometimes I have more fun with the comments than writing the original entry. Thanks, Joe!

Gina said...

I think it could be both. New is awesome and exciting but feeling that way again with someone you love and trust is even sweeter! Thank you so much for your kind comment, Rambly. Need to come visit you!

Gina said...

Ya think??? You are funny, Draug ;-)

lumdog2012 said...

Gina, it's like you wrote this as if I were your narrator. Can't say much other than its a little spooky and so, so, so well done! Sorry so late checking in. Crazy weekend.

Gina said...

Well, thank you so very much lumdog. I'm not entirely sure who the narrator actually was but so glad you connected. Late is great! I appreciate your wonderful comments as always. Hope your weekend was a good one!!!

Jaxson corey said...

Wow…this post tingled my toes. I’m so full of admiration and respect for firefighters in general and now you in particular Stewart. Thank you for sharing.
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