Once stone.
Turning my insides out,
You softened me.
Wringing like a wet rag,
You altered me.
Stunned.
Left
Wondering…
“Man, was I dreaming?”
Craving…
It would happen again.
Pleading…
Please…Please…PLEASE!
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This Trifextra entry was inspired by recent
conversations ;-)
41 comments:
I think I broke a sweat on that one Gina!
LOL at Sam's comment! :)
nicely done, Gina
I know the feeling, here. :) Nice job!
Really digging these trifectas. . .
Oh.. Gina. This is sweet sexy, and subtle. You always do such a great job with writing the emotion.. This is just one more time.
Please, please.. Yes. (and reminds me of my girl in the supermarket)
Tgif my friend
Its a wonderful feeling when someone is able to fill you with that kind of desire.
Terrific as always
Craving it would happen again... oh to have that memory - for anything... delicious emotion!
Yea! But I hope that's a good thing.
Sam's comment was funny. It had the "right" effect! Thanks, Christina!
Me too! Love finding common ground. Thanks!
I'm glad you're digging too and I'd be digging it if you'd hit up Trifecta soon. You've been talking about it for a while...
Coming from my saucy and sassy storytelling friend, I love that compliment even more. This woman, the one written here, wants a yes too.
Wha, what? Who is this supermarket girl you speak of? Do I know her?
Back atcha! TGIF. I'm really ready!
Uh-huh!!! The best! Thanks, Bo!
And something to replay in your mind over and over and over again. Until you get your wish. YES delicious!
Great writing! (I can't top Sam's comment, so I'll just leave it at that :))
I need a cigarette. ;)
Well done.
de
www.whimsygizmo.wordpress.com
Always a pleasure to read your work, Gina. I think you've left us all smiling a little brighter than we were before clicking on your link. Thanks. :)
Haha! Love the "I need a cigarette' comment.
The way you formatted this, it seemed like 333 words because I was on the edge of my seat with each line. Outstanding 33, one of my favorites.
I know, I know. . . Did you know that I was on the original list of writers for Yeah Write (then called lovelinks) like almost two years ago? It took me a while to get going on it. Let's hope it doesn't take as long for Trifecta. . .
From stone to jelly. Excellent poem, Gina!
Smoking.
No, I didn't know that but get your rear end over to Trifecta sooner than later. It's a fun change of pace.
I have a pack hidden away for times when I drag out the spicy. No, not really but thanks, de!
How sexciting!;-)Love has that kind of effect & definitely alters us,leaving us asking for more :D
Great going Gina:-)
Well, that pleases me. I love your comment, Tom. Thank you.
Me too. Sometimes wish I smoked ;-)
I think you appreciate my feistier entries, Lance. Thank you very much for the compliment. Love it!
Biology at it's finest? Or maybe the person...
Thank you so much, kymm.
I try ;-)
I LOVE your new word! Can I use it sometime? Yes, certain people alter us physically, mentally and/or emotionally. All good. Thanks for your kind comment.
Good one! Loving the comments on this one.
Well, I'm just happy you thought about the possibility of topping his. Thanks, Janna!
Ahhh reminders of new love or a womans want to 'feel' that way again. You softened me..wring like a wet rage - this was gorgeous.
I think the temperature rose a few degrees. What an...emotional piece lol
Sometimes I have more fun with the comments than writing the original entry. Thanks, Joe!
I think it could be both. New is awesome and exciting but feeling that way again with someone you love and trust is even sweeter! Thank you so much for your kind comment, Rambly. Need to come visit you!
Ya think??? You are funny, Draug ;-)
Gina, it's like you wrote this as if I were your narrator. Can't say much other than its a little spooky and so, so, so well done! Sorry so late checking in. Crazy weekend.
Well, thank you so very much lumdog. I'm not entirely sure who the narrator actually was but so glad you connected. Late is great! I appreciate your wonderful comments as always. Hope your weekend was a good one!!!
Wow…this post tingled my toes. I’m so full of admiration and respect for firefighters in general and now you in particular Stewart. Thank you for sharing.
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