Friday, March 15, 2013

Trifextra: Taken



Photo credit: Bérenger ZYLA / Foter.com / CC BY-NC-ND

33 words for this picture…

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(release mysterious fog)

"Ce qui est votre nom?" 

Pivot.

(cue mesmerizing reflections)

"Touchez ma main."

Beguiling.
Reaching. 
Tickling.

fingertips at first…

Gently

working their way up

To slender wrists.

it’s already too late...



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Because the picture is French.
"Ce qui est votre nom?"  What is your name?
"Touchez ma main." Touch my hand.

24 comments:

Bo said...

This is lovely! Very sensuous.

barbara said...

uh-oh . . . too late! Well played

lumdog2012 said...

Two strangers. Touching, tickling. Very sexy and intruiging. Well done. And congrats on the win! :)

katie eggeman said...

This is lovely, Very evocative of love.
Katie atBankerchick Scratchings

Draug said...

Ooo I wonder what's too late? Lovely piece. Very sensual.

Suzanne said...

Love this! So sensual and mysterious. Is it love or danger - or both? Well done!

Anonymous said...

A creepy paedophile is what I saw there; good use of direction.

kymm said...

Oh, no! Too late!

Unknown said...

I can only imagine what comes next ;-) wonderfully researched by the way. Very sensual and clever take. Congrats on your win also Gina - well deserved!

Silversound7 said...

I agree I read it and saw danger, like someone about to kidnap a child! But it takes talent to write ambiguity that gets such a strong response to whatever the reader finds in the words, great work!

Gina said...

Thanks, Bo!

Gina said...

Definitely too late for this poor child.

Gina said...

Interesting what everyone gets out if this. Different interpretations! Thanks, lumdog!

Gina said...

Yikes! Thanks bankerchick.

Gina said...

I think someone gets taken! Thank you Draug.

Gina said...

I think it's danger. And scariness! Thank you!

Gina said...

Bingo as sick as that is. I got the creeps from the picture even in its beauty. Thank you.

Gina said...

For that trusting child, yes.

Gina said...

Rambly, that is very kind of you to say. I was very intrigued by the picture.

Gina said...

It IS interesting how everyone has a different perception/interpretation of the same 33 words. Thank you so much for you kind comments!

Ann Bennett said...

Interesting interpretation. Good description of the sensuous nature of fog.

Gina said...

I actually really like fog. The mystery it lends to any day, situation!

Anonymous said...

very interesting - sending the mind in many directions...

Gina said...

Thanks! Seems like it from the comments.