Friday, March 15, 2013

Trifextra: Taken



Photo credit: Bérenger ZYLA / Foter.com / CC BY-NC-ND

33 words for this picture…

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(release mysterious fog)

"Ce qui est votre nom?" 

Pivot.

(cue mesmerizing reflections)

"Touchez ma main."

Beguiling.
Reaching. 
Tickling.

fingertips at first…

Gently

working their way up

To slender wrists.

it’s already too late...



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Because the picture is French.
"Ce qui est votre nom?"  What is your name?
"Touchez ma main." Touch my hand.

25 comments:

  1. This is lovely! Very sensuous.

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  2. uh-oh . . . too late! Well played

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    1. Definitely too late for this poor child.

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  3. Two strangers. Touching, tickling. Very sexy and intruiging. Well done. And congrats on the win! :)

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    1. Interesting what everyone gets out if this. Different interpretations! Thanks, lumdog!

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  4. Ooo I wonder what's too late? Lovely piece. Very sensual.

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    1. I think someone gets taken! Thank you Draug.

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  5. Love this! So sensual and mysterious. Is it love or danger - or both? Well done!

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    1. I think it's danger. And scariness! Thank you!

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  6. A creepy paedophile is what I saw there; good use of direction.

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    1. Bingo as sick as that is. I got the creeps from the picture even in its beauty. Thank you.

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  7. I can only imagine what comes next ;-) wonderfully researched by the way. Very sensual and clever take. Congrats on your win also Gina - well deserved!

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    1. Rambly, that is very kind of you to say. I was very intrigued by the picture.

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  8. I agree I read it and saw danger, like someone about to kidnap a child! But it takes talent to write ambiguity that gets such a strong response to whatever the reader finds in the words, great work!

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    1. It IS interesting how everyone has a different perception/interpretation of the same 33 words. Thank you so much for you kind comments!

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  9. Interesting interpretation. Good description of the sensuous nature of fog.

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    1. I actually really like fog. The mystery it lends to any day, situation!

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  10. very interesting - sending the mind in many directions...

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    1. Thanks! Seems like it from the comments.

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