“Tether
our hearts forever.”
His
ring said.
“Forever
and more.”
Said
hers.
“Your
skin is velvet. Your hair, a crown of spun gold.”
Sighing.
“Come,
husband.”
Coaxing.
“Where,
wife?”
“The loft.”
“Mmmmm
hmmmm.”
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Written for Trifecta using the words tether, loft, crown then adding 30 more. Come over and read some awesome entries then vote on Sunday!
40 comments:
Now that's what I'm talking about! My favourite piece so far, Gina! Very natural flow to the story. Very good use of the prompts.
This is fabulous! Great take on the prompt Gina! And I love the title. :)
This was a fun read. Feels very real, especially the sigh. Great piece of writing.
Like where this went.
Oh I bet they're going to dig out some old board games to play!
you're saucy
You just made my day, Tom!
Suzanne, thank you very much! The title seemed fitting!
Felt "real" to me too. Thanks, lum.
Kind of had a life of its own. Thanks!
Yes! They LOVE to play cribbage!
Urban Dictionary definition: cheeky, fresh, or brash.
I will take that as a compliment!
Ooh, delicious!
Sweet AND spicy. :)
Great take on the prompt! Very spicy! I like it!
This is just fantastic. I love that your characters are husband and wife. Married people can still bring the heat. ;)
Thoroughly enjoyed this!
Yes! Very yummy! Thank you!
Saucy!
Thanks!
This is so sweet. I like how the conversation went, and the ring inscriptions made it even deeper.
Oh this is a good marriage... great piece
No one can beat you in creating dialogues which sound so natural Gina!Loved the scene-romantic and sweet:-)
Guess that hair and skin line worked. "The Loft"... says a lot in two words. Nice.
It is interesting what is engraved in rings. I used to be a jeweler.
rawr (is that how you type that?)
I like the realness of the romance and the writing.
I sure do like the coaxing and the mmmmm-hmmmming... :) What a great afternoon it will be for this pair of lovebirds!
Oh, married couples know all the tricks! Thank you you so much!
Thanks, Janna!!!!
Yeah, a marriage needs some spice. Thanks, Bjorn.
Atreyee, you are way too nice to me! Thank you so much!
Beautifully done! You do romance up right!
I guess "The Loft" is quite the destination! Thanks.
I agree. There is probably something engraved in most. I find it very interesting.
I'm not sure but I think so...
I love romance. Thank you for appreciating it.
Who doesn't??? I'm sure it was a lovely way to spend a Saturday afternoon!!!
Tina!!! Thank you. Romance is in my wheelhouse!
Heh heh. You're making me blush. We just moved into a flat with not one, but two lofts. Thanks for linking up. Don't forget to vote!
Love that first inscription! Sweet post.
So funny! Loft was the hard word here, for me. TWO? Choices!
Thank, Kymm. I like it too.
Ah so sweet. You made the three words seem like they were ones you were going to use in the first place (if that makes sense). I loved this!
You are so sweet to pay such a wonderful comment. It does make sense and make me happy! Thanks so very much, Linda!
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