Wednesday, January 28, 2015

Relax : Yeah Write Microstory

[lingering kiss]
"Going to the corner for eggs unless you'd prefer donuts. Don't you dare move one perfect muscle.  Here's the remote. Books are under the nightstand. Relax! Oh, there're cameras to dissuade snooping, but, really, make yourself completely at home!" 
[wink]



21 comments:

Anonymous said...

There is definitely something creepy going on here!

kymm said...

Oooohhhhhh, what a charmer!

TMWHickman said...

Hmmm...cameras? Relax is probably the last thing she will do!

Whispering Thoughts said...

Don't know why it reminds me of Gone Girl

Anonymous said...

Bet she's regretting she didn't know about the cameras earlier. Yuck!
Hmm. Just realized I'm assuming it's a man speaking.

Gina said...

Definitely!

Gina said...

Watch out for them, right?

Gina said...

I think she's kidding, but if I were him I'd be good just in case!

Gina said...

Kind of creepy maybe?

Gina said...

Yay!!!!! Cynk, it's the woman saying it to the guy! I wanted to go against what might be considered more typical.

Shailaja V said...

I actually did think it was the woman, because of that 'perfect muscle' reference. How very creative!

Kir said...

First dates /nights are so romantic ;)
Nice write Gina.

Jack said...

I see you have met my ex.

Anonymous said...

Love it! I thought it was a female narrator based on "one perfect muscle." I'm wondering what shenanigans he pulled for the cameras for her to watch later.

Anonymous said...

I like her sass and the lingering kiss is a nice touch to start this off.

Gina said...

Thanks Kir! Miss you!

Gina said...

Hahaha! Well, no but...if you say so!

Gina said...

That is EXACTLY why I used that phrase as a clue to the narrator. Thank you for noticing and visiting!

Gina said...

If it were me, being him, I would pull so much sass on her and do all sorts of things for her "supposed" camera!

Gina said...

The kiss is to set up her desire and interest, and I love sass! Thanks for the comment, Nate!

Unknown said...

Up until the camera comment, I got the distinct feeling that the guy was somehow chained or kept in place. The 'don't move a muscle' comment lending to that theory and her having to give him the remote and the books within reach. Intriguing indeed.