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Laughing nervously, my eyes squeeze tightly anticipating where I’ll first feel his breath, or anything. I await his lips, or something.
My stomach pitches.
That deep, aching warmth spreads across nether places sweeping up universes within its centripetal force.
A gasp slips.
A gasp slips.
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That gasp is why you never eat chili before you kiss someone the first time.
Oh my, steamy! I don't think I can even remember that far back. The stomach pitching and gasp slipping are great word choices!
Wisecracker!
Yes, sometimes "Steamy" Gina comes out to play! I remember it/them like it/they was/were yesterday. I definitely recall the outstanding ones. The thought can still make me feel something. Then there are the "toads" I'd happily forget, although not too many of them thankfully. I am blessed with an elephant's memory! Thanks, Stacie!
Hmmmmm Those nether places, Gina!!! Sweet.
Nah, I once shared a moment with a girl who surprised both of us with...commentary from below.
This reminded me.
"Sweeping up universes" is such a wonderful description! This piece said so much and brought up so many feelings. Well-paced, sensual and tasteful. Very nice :)
Jack,
As the first to read this post, and as my blogging friend who happens to be an exceptional writer, I could wring your neck for not correcting my it's/its mistake!
Gina
P.S. Oh MY! Now that's what I call a surprise (for both of you, I am positive!!!)!
Thanks, kymm! Loved your post!!!
I love this comment!!! Thank you so much, silverleaf. It means bunches to me!
The first kiss is so special. You captured the anticipation perfectly.
I think you've taken my crown as the romance queen...but I happily hand it over for now, because this was sweet, heady and full of all the anticipation that moment is about. :)
Thanks, Marcy. Kissing anyone for the first time, if you really like them, brings a good case of the tingles!
NEVER!!! I can be your lady-in-waiting in the romance department! Thank you, Kir. Your words are always so kind and thoughtful!
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