Friday, March 8, 2013

Trifextra: Please



Once stone.

Turning my insides out,

You softened me.

Wringing like a wet rag,

You altered me.

Stunned.

Left

Wondering…

“Man, was I dreaming?”

Craving…

It would happen again.

Pleading…

Please…Please…PLEASE!

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This Trifextra entry was inspired by recent conversations ;-)


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41 comments:

  1. UnknownMarch 8, 2013 at 12:44 PM

    I think I broke a sweat on that one Gina!

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  2. christinaMarch 8, 2013 at 1:18 PM

    LOL at Sam's comment! :)
    nicely done, Gina

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    1. GinaMarch 8, 2013 at 5:18 PM

      Sam's comment was funny. It had the "right" effect! Thanks, Christina!

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  3. AnonymousMarch 8, 2013 at 1:55 PM

    I know the feeling, here. :) Nice job!

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    1. GinaMarch 8, 2013 at 5:19 PM

      Me too! Love finding common ground. Thanks!

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  4. Jared KarolMarch 8, 2013 at 3:25 PM

    Really digging these trifectas. . .

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    1. GinaMarch 8, 2013 at 5:20 PM

      I'm glad you're digging too and I'd be digging it if you'd hit up Trifecta soon. You've been talking about it for a while...

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    2. Jared KarolMarch 8, 2013 at 10:27 PM

      I know, I know. . . Did you know that I was on the original list of writers for Yeah Write (then called lovelinks) like almost two years ago? It took me a while to get going on it. Let's hope it doesn't take as long for Trifecta. . .

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    3. GinaMarch 9, 2013 at 8:45 AM

      No, I didn't know that but get your rear end over to Trifecta sooner than later. It's a fun change of pace.

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  5. KirMarch 8, 2013 at 3:26 PM

    Oh.. Gina. This is sweet sexy, and subtle. You always do such a great job with writing the emotion.. This is just one more time.

    Please, please.. Yes. (and reminds me of my girl in the supermarket)

    Tgif my friend

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    1. GinaMarch 8, 2013 at 5:23 PM

      Coming from my saucy and sassy storytelling friend, I love that compliment even more. This woman, the one written here, wants a yes too.

      Wha, what? Who is this supermarket girl you speak of? Do I know her?

      Back atcha! TGIF. I'm really ready!

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  6. BoMarch 8, 2013 at 4:53 PM

    Its a wonderful feeling when someone is able to fill you with that kind of desire.

    Terrific as always

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  7. stephMarch 8, 2013 at 5:16 PM

    Craving it would happen again... oh to have that memory - for anything... delicious emotion!

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    1. GinaMarch 8, 2013 at 5:26 PM

      And something to replay in your mind over and over and over again. Until you get your wish. YES delicious!

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  8. AnonymousMarch 8, 2013 at 5:45 PM

    Great writing! (I can't top Sam's comment, so I'll just leave it at that :))

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    1. GinaMarch 9, 2013 at 12:09 PM

      Well, I'm just happy you thought about the possibility of topping his. Thanks, Janna!

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  9. De JacksonMarch 8, 2013 at 6:19 PM

    I need a cigarette. ;)

    Well done.

    de
    www.whimsygizmo.wordpress.com

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    1. GinaMarch 9, 2013 at 8:47 AM

      I have a pack hidden away for times when I drag out the spicy. No, not really but thanks, de!

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  10. Thomas Charles MacInnesMarch 8, 2013 at 6:49 PM

    Always a pleasure to read your work, Gina. I think you've left us all smiling a little brighter than we were before clicking on your link. Thanks. :)

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    1. GinaMarch 9, 2013 at 8:48 AM

      Well, that pleases me. I love your comment, Tom. Thank you.

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  11. About Last WeekendMarch 8, 2013 at 6:56 PM

    Haha! Love the "I need a cigarette' comment.

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  12. LanceMarch 8, 2013 at 8:45 PM

    The way you formatted this, it seemed like 333 words because I was on the edge of my seat with each line. Outstanding 33, one of my favorites.

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    1. GinaMarch 9, 2013 at 8:49 AM

      I think you appreciate my feistier entries, Lance. Thank you very much for the compliment. Love it!

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  13. kymmMarch 9, 2013 at 2:29 AM

    From stone to jelly. Excellent poem, Gina!

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    1. GinaMarch 9, 2013 at 8:50 AM

      Biology at it's finest? Or maybe the person...

      Thank you so much, kymm.

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  14. TrifectaMarch 9, 2013 at 5:53 AM

    Smoking.

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  15. AtreyeeMarch 9, 2013 at 8:47 AM

    How sexciting!;-)Love has that kind of effect & definitely alters us,leaving us asking for more :D

    Great going Gina:-)

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    1. GinaMarch 9, 2013 at 8:53 AM

      I LOVE your new word! Can I use it sometime? Yes, certain people alter us physically, mentally and/or emotionally. All good. Thanks for your kind comment.

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  16. AnonymousMarch 9, 2013 at 11:29 AM

    Good one! Loving the comments on this one.

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    1. GinaMarch 10, 2013 at 10:44 AM

      Sometimes I have more fun with the comments than writing the original entry. Thanks, Joe!

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  17. UnknownMarch 9, 2013 at 6:13 PM

    Ahhh reminders of new love or a womans want to 'feel' that way again. You softened me..wring like a wet rage - this was gorgeous.

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    1. GinaMarch 10, 2013 at 10:45 AM

      I think it could be both. New is awesome and exciting but feeling that way again with someone you love and trust is even sweeter! Thank you so much for your kind comment, Rambly. Need to come visit you!

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  18. DraugMarch 10, 2013 at 9:32 AM

    I think the temperature rose a few degrees. What an...emotional piece lol

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  19. lumdog2012March 10, 2013 at 9:21 PM

    Gina, it's like you wrote this as if I were your narrator. Can't say much other than its a little spooky and so, so, so well done! Sorry so late checking in. Crazy weekend.

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    1. GinaMarch 10, 2013 at 9:47 PM

      Well, thank you so very much lumdog. I'm not entirely sure who the narrator actually was but so glad you connected. Late is great! I appreciate your wonderful comments as always. Hope your weekend was a good one!!!

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