Monday, March 3, 2014

Kissing


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Breaths commingle with playful flutters barely touching. Mine part ever so slightly in invitation. Yours R.S.V.P, first warmly, then insanely, thoroughly and unmistakably. 

Because I already tried words to worm my way in…

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Exactly 33 words for the third definition of WORM:
3:  to obtain or extract by artful or insidious question or by pleading, asking, or persuading – usually with out of<finally wormed the truth out of him>

28 comments:

  1. A sensual delight, Gina. Lovely buildup and love that last, nuanced line. Wonderful!

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    1. Thank you, Jo-Anne. Sometimes you have to pull out the "big" guns to get someone's attention.

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  2. Love those "playful flutters barely touching." :)

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  3. Sometimes words just aren't gonna cut it! Sweet.

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    1. You are perfectly right, kymm. *Sometimes* you have to get way the only words part to see what's there. If anything. And my favorite part!

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  4. This made me go outside and roll in the snow;)

    Hot, Miss Gina!! ;)

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    1. It's snowing here, too! Feeling warm lately ;-)!

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  5. Someone's got a penchant for romance!

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  6. What a great way to write about WORM! :)

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  7. Words and worms make for wow.

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  8. Sizzling hot, just like I like them. Now, if you'll excuse me, I need a cold shower.

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    1. Tina, you're funn! Keep warm down there!

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  9. where did my comment go?

    Sometimes words are the last thing you need, and I love a kiss like that.

    love when you write like this Gina. XO

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    1. Sometime, you just need to kiss, cut the talk, and kiss!!!! Then talk. I don't know. Sometimes there is just so much built up....stuff...that you have to blast through it. Kissing, usually it's because it's a first time or new, just releases the tension and you can move past the sexual tension. Shall we call it productive?

      Thanks, doll! I often write about this because it feels natural.

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  10. I think this is my favorite of the bunch this week. Great wordplay! Very sensual and visceral.

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  11. I love this!! A passionate story in 33 words. Nice!

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