Friday, March 15, 2013

Trifextra: Taken



Photo credit: Bérenger ZYLA / Foter.com / CC BY-NC-ND

33 words for this picture…

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(release mysterious fog)

"Ce qui est votre nom?" 

Pivot.

(cue mesmerizing reflections)

"Touchez ma main."

Beguiling.
Reaching. 
Tickling.

fingertips at first…

Gently

working their way up

To slender wrists.

it’s already too late...



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Because the picture is French.
"Ce qui est votre nom?"  What is your name?
"Touchez ma main." Touch my hand.

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24 comments:

  1. BoMarch 15, 2013 at 6:33 PM

    This is lovely! Very sensuous.

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  2. barbaraMarch 15, 2013 at 11:35 PM

    uh-oh . . . too late! Well played

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  3. lumdog2012March 16, 2013 at 7:09 AM

    Two strangers. Touching, tickling. Very sexy and intruiging. Well done. And congrats on the win! :)

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    1. GinaMarch 17, 2013 at 9:39 AM

      Interesting what everyone gets out if this. Different interpretations! Thanks, lumdog!

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  4. katie eggemanMarch 16, 2013 at 8:09 AM

    This is lovely, Very evocative of love.
    Katie atBankerchick Scratchings

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  5. DraugMarch 16, 2013 at 8:24 AM

    Ooo I wonder what's too late? Lovely piece. Very sensual.

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    1. GinaMarch 17, 2013 at 9:42 AM

      I think someone gets taken! Thank you Draug.

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  6. SuzanneMarch 16, 2013 at 4:02 PM

    Love this! So sensual and mysterious. Is it love or danger - or both? Well done!

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    1. GinaMarch 17, 2013 at 9:43 AM

      I think it's danger. And scariness! Thank you!

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  7. AnonymousMarch 16, 2013 at 4:52 PM

    A creepy paedophile is what I saw there; good use of direction.

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    1. GinaMarch 17, 2013 at 9:44 AM

      Bingo as sick as that is. I got the creeps from the picture even in its beauty. Thank you.

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  8. kymmMarch 16, 2013 at 7:50 PM

    Oh, no! Too late!

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  9. UnknownMarch 17, 2013 at 1:25 AM

    I can only imagine what comes next ;-) wonderfully researched by the way. Very sensual and clever take. Congrats on your win also Gina - well deserved!

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    1. GinaMarch 17, 2013 at 9:46 AM

      Rambly, that is very kind of you to say. I was very intrigued by the picture.

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  10. Silversound7March 17, 2013 at 1:55 AM

    I agree I read it and saw danger, like someone about to kidnap a child! But it takes talent to write ambiguity that gets such a strong response to whatever the reader finds in the words, great work!

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    1. GinaMarch 17, 2013 at 9:48 AM

      It IS interesting how everyone has a different perception/interpretation of the same 33 words. Thank you so much for you kind comments!

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  11. Ann BennettMarch 17, 2013 at 11:22 AM

    Interesting interpretation. Good description of the sensuous nature of fog.

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    1. GinaMarch 17, 2013 at 10:33 PM

      I actually really like fog. The mystery it lends to any day, situation!

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  12. AnonymousMarch 18, 2013 at 5:45 AM

    very interesting - sending the mind in many directions...

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