Wednesday, November 11, 2015

You Made an Ass Out of Me: Yeah Write Microstories

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I heaved it effortlessly; 
children playing catch. 
You turned it around lackadaisically 
while I looked away. Seeing us.
Trusting, happily distracted, and assuming 
you had it. But you were reckless.
Together, we watched it shatter.
I’m right where I started.
Fooled and
Erehwon.

8 comments:

  1. Yeah, we don't ever think about the consequences of the heart the first time, we just toss it right out there.

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    1. Sometimes we don't think about it anytime.

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  2. Phew, I read it in one breath! This was good.

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  3. Beautiful! And even though your microstory is about more serious matters, it reminds me of when my uncle threw a watermelon to my other uncle, who just stood there holding his drink. The result was a shattered watermelon all over the floor.

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    1. Ginny, what's so funny is I thought about playing egg toss at picnics! But your watermelon story is sort right on target with what I meant. Sometimes one side's with it while the other isn't even paying attention, hence the mess of a shattered whatever!

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  4. Ah sad. But if you don't put yourself out there, you may never find true love!

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